I love you so dearly, so warming and bright,
you give such joy that lasts me through the night.
Your smiling face always so true,
Don’t you see? I love you.
Of all the girls I’ve come to love,
you beyond them, soar infinitely above.
Your eyes do so shimmer,
to lighten up my life,
I’ll love you so dearly throughout any strife.
Although you no longer see me,
I’m sure you feel me around.
Even though for awhile…
I’ve been deep in the ground…
That one bad night…
when we were cold and lost,
I held you so tightly to ward off the frost…
I can’t believe you did this,
Not in my wildest nightmare, never.
Because you had said you’d love me forever.
You lied to me my dear,
and that is a true pain.
Now pay attention
to that sound of the rain.
But don’t let it get to you,
just rest now- fall asleep.
For in the morning your lover shall weep.
I’d say I love you,
but with your blood there will be art…
Time to be afraid…
I’m coming…for your heart…
Credit To: Kingwerewolf13
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It seems it’s been a while since anyone has commented, but I loved the poem and hope to find more like this :3 10/10 in my opinion. Sweet, creepy and simple.
It’s was great had a lot of fun with this one it’ll go public on valentine’s weekend 2016.
https://youtu.be/nwgxvCFtOtY
For this poem is sweet,and I feel it so dear…But maybe I can find another way,to shed a tear..For sadly this poem,does it so rhyme,does not make my dear heart swell,nor in time.
this, is really good.. :)
I’ll give you a 10/10 it was very well written and interesting for a poem.
thank you so much. you guys are great.
Da FUCK, reading this and an ad for MyCandyLove popped up WTF OAo
You guys are so great. I love the support. As soon as my laptop starts working again, ill write more. I feel so loved. <3
Wow, i’ve been swimming in a stream of crappy pastas for a while now.
I can’t recall reading a good poem pasta ever. Before now!
10/10, favorited and (i know it ain’t much) called epic, fantastic and awesome by me!
Keep up the good work man!
Kingwerewolf13
June 14, 2013
Ding- We have a winner. ^~^
XD I like whoever this is.
Anyways, nice poem for Valentines Day. XD I wouldn’t want a malevolent spirit after me if I were that girl.
But, I’m not a cold bitch that suddenly wants a new ‘thing’ to happen. I would at least weep over the spirits death for a while. But also, GHOST! WHAT DO YOU EXPECT?! YOU ARE DEAD! EVEN AS SUCH, SHE KNOWS YOU STILL EXIST…..oh, wait. Damn, she’s harsh. ;D
Love this poem >w< I have this poem up on my site, but with credit to the creator :3
Thank you so much. I love how kind sooommmee of you are. I’ll try to write a new one soon. Hopefully not a poem. XD
Dude this is awesome, dang, you get my approval that’s for sure! well you don’t need it but, anyway great job! (^-^)
So, the author told me to read this… now I must throw things at him at FNM! Specifically pennies.
Glad sooomeone i know read this and comment. Now to move to Shoshie. Im sure she’d appreciate the creepiness. Please show her, and her boyfriend who’s name escapes me but is good at picking packs. XD
Shoshie and Chris broke up actually
Oh who cares if no one else likes it ( although I did ). it’s your work..as long as you’re happy with it, wtf?
Thank you. its people like you that make me happy to read comments. =]
Listen, I wasn’t trying to be scary. I was going for unsettling. I love creepypastas, so I wanted to make one. this was my 3rd try. so to those who didn’t like it, I’ll try harder. And to those of you who loved it, I’m very happy that you do. Thank you for your time, and have a nice weekend
I don’t know why but I think I’m in love with this poem.
Really? I was just trying to make a pasta. I’m so happy some of you like it. <3
I thot my ex was a jelous bitch
you will all die
Cool.
Amazing poem! Would there be anyone against me making it into a song?
Oh, please do, just email it to me. I’d be honored. :3
I think that the man died awhile ago, the girl is now in a new relationship and the man is angry so he wants to KILL her as a ghost
Ding- We have a winner. ^~^
Although the rhyme scheme is impressive, I don’t understand what is happening in this particular poem. I am a poet as well, but I am just lost with this one. I understand that he is going to or has killed her, but what did she do? That’s one of the few things that I don’t understand.
the girl is in a new relationship. She didn’t stay loyal to her dead lover[the poet].
But how do you stay loyal to someone who’s dead? You assume that they want you to move on and be happy don’t you? Not dwell on them forever and never be happy again, for the threat that they will come back from the dead and rip out your heart?
Well, time to call in Melinda (Main chick from Ghost Whisperer)
That’s it^ <3
first off, my name is Shane too.
Secondly, I thank you for appreciating the scheme.
and lastly, Its the thoughts of a spirit, whom in life, loved a girl very much. She quickly Replaced him after his death and it sent him into a rage. but thank you for your comment, and I’ll try to elaborate it in story form.
Im sorry but im sure he’s not as gay as the pne who pulled off the roses and violets poem
thanks =]
woah there…
Roses are red
Violets are blue
This poem is gay
And my friend, so are you.
Violets are VIOLET. That is why they were named VIOLETS. Not AZURES or anything.
You realise that violet is blue-purple, right?
And i say “Fuck you”.
Poems haven’t been scary since Poe. Give it a rest!
I am a horror fanatic and Poe’s poems are NOT scary.
this was great
So kind. :3
thank you
Beautiful…loved it!
Thank you! =]
Why so jealous??
You know..poems have to do more than just rhyme..
Oh, would you rather it be a haiku?
Actually yes I would