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A Poem for Your Heart



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I love you so dearly, so warming and bright,
you give such joy that lasts me through the night.
Your smiling face always so true,
Don’t you see? I love you.

Of all the girls I’ve come to love,
you beyond them, soar infinitely above.
Your eyes do so shimmer,
to lighten up my life,
I’ll love you so dearly throughout any strife.

Although you no longer see me,
I’m sure you feel me around.
Even though for awhile…
I’ve been deep in the ground…

That one bad night…
when we were cold and lost,
I held you so tightly to ward off the frost…

I can’t believe you did this,
Not in my wildest nightmare, never.
Because you had said you’d love me forever.

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You lied to me my dear,
and that is a true pain.
Now pay attention
to that sound of the rain.
But don’t let it get to you,
just rest now- fall asleep.
For in the morning your lover shall weep.

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I’d say I love you,
but with your blood there will be art…
Time to be afraid…
I’m coming…for your heart…

Credit To: Kingwerewolf13

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51 thoughts on “A Poem for Your Heart”

  1. It seems it’s been a while since anyone has commented, but I loved the poem and hope to find more like this :3 10/10 in my opinion. Sweet, creepy and simple.

  2. For this poem is sweet,and I feel it so dear…But maybe I can find another way,to shed a tear..For sadly this poem,does it so rhyme,does not make my dear heart swell,nor in time.

  3. You guys are so great. I love the support. As soon as my laptop starts working again, ill write more. I feel so loved. <3

  4. Wow, i’ve been swimming in a stream of crappy pastas for a while now.
    I can’t recall reading a good poem pasta ever. Before now!
    10/10, favorited and (i know it ain’t much) called epic, fantastic and awesome by me!
    Keep up the good work man!

  5. Kingwerewolf13
    June 14, 2013
    Ding- We have a winner. ^~^

    XD I like whoever this is.

    Anyways, nice poem for Valentines Day. XD I wouldn’t want a malevolent spirit after me if I were that girl.

    But, I’m not a cold bitch that suddenly wants a new ‘thing’ to happen. I would at least weep over the spirits death for a while. But also, GHOST! WHAT DO YOU EXPECT?! YOU ARE DEAD! EVEN AS SUCH, SHE KNOWS YOU STILL EXIST…..oh, wait. Damn, she’s harsh. ;D

  6. Thank you so much. I love how kind sooommmee of you are. I’ll try to write a new one soon. Hopefully not a poem. XD

    1. Glad sooomeone i know read this and comment. Now to move to Shoshie. Im sure she’d appreciate the creepiness. Please show her, and her boyfriend who’s name escapes me but is good at picking packs. XD

  7. FasterpussyTkat

    Oh who cares if no one else likes it ( although I did ). it’s your work..as long as you’re happy with it, wtf?

  8. Kingwerewolf13

    Listen, I wasn’t trying to be scary. I was going for unsettling. I love creepypastas, so I wanted to make one. this was my 3rd try. so to those who didn’t like it, I’ll try harder. And to those of you who loved it, I’m very happy that you do. Thank you for your time, and have a nice weekend

  9. that guy under your bed

    I think that the man died awhile ago, the girl is now in a new relationship and the man is angry so he wants to KILL her as a ghost

  10. Although the rhyme scheme is impressive, I don’t understand what is happening in this particular poem. I am a poet as well, but I am just lost with this one. I understand that he is going to or has killed her, but what did she do? That’s one of the few things that I don’t understand.

      1. She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named

        But how do you stay loyal to someone who’s dead? You assume that they want you to move on and be happy don’t you? Not dwell on them forever and never be happy again, for the threat that they will come back from the dead and rip out your heart?

    1. Kingwerewolf13

      first off, my name is Shane too.
      Secondly, I thank you for appreciating the scheme.
      and lastly, Its the thoughts of a spirit, whom in life, loved a girl very much. She quickly Replaced him after his death and it sent him into a rage. but thank you for your comment, and I’ll try to elaborate it in story form.

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